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PostPosted: November 18th, 2009, 4:30 am 
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 Post subject: Re: My Story
PostPosted: November 18th, 2009, 5:22 am 
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long story..But good. :P

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PostPosted: November 18th, 2009, 2:25 pm 
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That is quite a long story there.. How long did it take you to right it?

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 Post subject: Re: My Story
PostPosted: November 18th, 2009, 4:13 pm 
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Krazy wrote:
That is quite a long story there.. How long did it take you to right it?


i dont rly know i just kinda sat down and started wrting...and didnt stop lol

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 Post subject: Re: My Story
PostPosted: November 22nd, 2009, 5:24 pm 
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Oh my god! You spent a lot of time on that. I took the time to read it, and it was pretty good. You should consider making it into a full book. It would sell. Anyways there were a few spelling and punctuation but I doubt you want my critique. It was good though and I thought it was very worth reading. Good Job!

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PostPosted: November 23rd, 2009, 1:58 pm 
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Oh my god! You spent a lot of time on that. I took the time to read it, and it was pretty good. You should consider making it into a full book. It would sell. Anyways there were a few spelling and punctuation but I doubt you want my critique. It was good though and I thought it was very worth reading. Good Job!


i want anyone's critique for ythe final copy. and to everyone who has read this after i turn it in and get a grade i will post my final version ofthe story as i have made revisions to it.

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 Post subject: Re: My Story
PostPosted: November 23rd, 2009, 7:27 pm 
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Very good story. Write more. :D

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PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 1:43 pm 
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Very good story. Write more. :D


ok here's an update on my story if anyone's interested...the story is longer now, much longer. My word count right now is around 8100 i think. I plan on writing more for it too. my final word goal is 10,000. if you guys have any ideas for additions plz post em.

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PostPosted: November 27th, 2009, 2:04 pm 
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That was pretty good i hope your teacher likes it. I think it deserves an A.

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