Honestly, I don't think this is much of a guide. Unless I'm totally reading it wrong, it doesn't even tell you what the fight pits are.
Really, all you've done is posted what armour to wear, and I'd suspect that people already know what the best armour of their class would be.
You also posted something along the lines of 'don't hide', while ignoring the fact that it's a strategy.
A true guide should at least include a small summary of what the place is, various strategies (not just different classes you can be), and a more formal style of writing.
You, at one point said something like 'and oh, ya'. The guide, itself, would read a lot better if it didn't sound as if you were thinking of this as you were writing.
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Use ancient magic if you have done desert treasure, use mystic/ahrims/splitbark, runes(of course) and ancient staff/staff of choice...Oh yeah bring mage pot if needed to cast some spells.
Try going back and re-writing it so it sounds like you thought it out in advance or something.
You also put some first-person references in the guide, and while that may personalize the guide, it doesn't fit well.
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I don't use food because I'm saving it up for other things...
The purpose of a guide is to explain something, and I don't think the above line really explains anything other than that you may be broke.
If you wanted to say something like that (which I don't know why you would), try saying
"If you're saving up for other things, you may choose not to use food, but don't expect to live long"
Or
"Food is not required, so if you're saving up for other things, there's no need to waste money on it."
Also, you have no images of the inside of the fight pits, and no map of the fight pits (which would be something extremely useful in a guide of the fight pits).
Probably should work on the guide a bit.